Here is the critique about Jennifer's project:
The project has been designed very compactly and systematically. All the
topic seems to be in order. Introduction covers almost every thing. A few
more examples could be added in the introduction. I couldn't see the picture
on this page, every thing else seems to be working fine. Application and
sensor construction section brief useful information on the sensors. Sensor
development is very general in nature. Though it gives an outline for the
considerations about development criterion, they could be made more
detailed. Commercial sensors section covers all essential information. In
general project is well organised, systematic and designed in a manner that
every one can understand.